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OmniVoran
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PostSubject: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:07 am

Name: Vatik
Alias/Nickname: None.
Age: 15
Month and Day of Birth: 2/13 (It was on a Friday o.O)
Place of Birth: Konats
Theme Song: The LoZ: Song Of Time Dubstep Remix
Gender: Male
Race: Konatsian
Home Planet: Earth

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Alignment: Chaotic Good.
Personality: Vatik is an angry person. The Only reason he might be angry is most likely because he lost most of his memory. Vatick is not only angry, but he knows that he has to do the right thing.
Weaknesses:
  • Impatient- Unable to wait patiently or tolerate delay; restless. Unable to endure irritation or opposition; intolerant.
  • Domineering: too focused on doing it "Vatik's way"
  • Soft-Hearted: the thought of killing one's enemy doesn't sit well with Vatik, sometimes causing him to decline the finishing blow, or miss entirely.


Strengths:
  • Bravery- Not shrinking from threat, challenge, difficulty, or pain; acting on convictions even if unpopular
  • Unpredictable- Difficult to foretell or foresee, their actions are so chaotic its impossible to know what they are going to do next.
  • Persistence- Finishing what one starts; persisting in a course of action in spite of obstacles.


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Physical Appearance: Vatik has a great head of red crazy hair. He had a face full of mystery. The color of his eyes is a beautiful shade of blue-green. He had a nice and sturdy build. His Biceps are average compared to most fighters. He did not have any visible trapezius muscles.
Attire: Vatik wore a metal headpiece on his forehead. Upon his shoulders were metal shoulder plates. He wears a purple tunic. His pants were brown. Beneath his tunic was a white shirt. He also wears Arm Braces on his Forearms. He had nice shoes on his feet. On his back, was a sheathed sword.
Picture: (Thanks, Onis!)

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Ki Color: Blue
Technique List:
Spirit Canon:
 
Burning Attack:
 

Power Level: Starts off at 100

Racial Abilities: [Special Ability – Alignment Aura] Konastians have the power to influence the abilities of others depending on their relative alignment. Those with complimentary alignments [of the same moral, and adjacent ethical alignment (Lawful Good is compatible with all Good alignments and Lawful Neutral. True Neutral is compatible with all Neutral alignments, Neutral Good, and Neutral Evil. Etc.)] will receive unlimited ki usage and be immune to fatigue for the duration of the technique, and those with opposing ethical alignment (All Good alignments are opposed by Evil, True Neutral is opposed by Lawful and Chaotic Alignments of Good and Evil. Lawful Neutral is opposed by Chaotic Neutral and vice-versa) will be stripped of their ability to use manipulate ki for the duration of the technique. This can only be used three times within a given topic and lasts for three posts each time.
[Special Ability – Heroic Paragon] Konatsians have the power to inspire and empower their allies due to their natural aura of charisma and heroism. For six turns, and only three times an out-of-universe week, a Konatsian can increase the power level of his companions, but not himself, by 20% each turn. The first turn multiply by 1.2, the second by 1.4, the third by 1.6, the fourth by 1.8, the fifth by 2, and the final by 2.2.

Transformations:
Cultural Paragon x5 – Requires 10,000 PL
Legendary Hero – x10 – Requires 50,000 PL

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Weapons:
  • Brightkiller- A sword that was given to Vatik by the King.

Equipment:
  • Sword Sheath


Biography: The Konatsians, a proud and powerful race. Vatik was a guard of the Royal family. Vatik was sent out on a quest to get some medicine for the Royal Apothecary. When he comepleted his quest, he had come across something quite strange. It had appeared as if the Royal Council was beating on the King of Konatsians. Vatik rushed to help, but they were all gone. Vatik then helped the King. He had fallen asleep. When it was morning time, he had woken up in a forest. He knew something was wrong. He wasn't on planet Konats. He was at a different planet. Vatik couldn't remember anything. It appeared that someone had taken all memory away. The only thing he could remember was his name, Vatik.

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Sword:
 
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Last edited by Oran on Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:31 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:28 am

lol, Oran, none of his weaknesses are weaknesses. The first two are personalities and the last one seems more like a strength to me, though I can see it as both.

I'm going to need you to add in real weaknesses, then it will be accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:43 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 1:36 pm

Explain how being impatient will be a weakness in battle like you did for his third weakness, soft hearted.

Now having a domineering weakness still sounds like a personality to me. If you can explain to me how that is a weakness in a fight, you can use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:02 pm

Seems pretty simple to me, he won't always make the best choice and he won't accept advice during combat. If someone else notices a weakness in the enemy's style that can be exploited by doing X then he's not going to do X unless that's what he was doing in the first place.
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:12 pm

TardyClock wrote:
Seems pretty simple to me, he won't always make the best choice and he won't accept advice during combat. If someone else notices a weakness in the enemy's style that can be exploited by doing X then he's not going to do X unless that's what he was doing in the first place.

The thing is, they contradict his strength of self regulation. If he has a strong will and keeps himself in check, how is he also reckless and domineering? Doesn't fit well to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:27 pm

I had not noticed the self-control strength... which could potentially work as "I have all these weaknesses... but I can choose to ignore them becaue of this strength,"
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:39 pm

Re-Edited, guys. I figured that one strength was quite OP'ed and just switcheded it with something else.
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PostSubject: Re: Vatik   Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:50 pm

Accepted.
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