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PostSubject: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:50 am

Quemon sees a line of men and says "Oh shit" seeing he was in a line of people with a big red guy saying that you go to rather heaven or hell. He then sees a man walk up to the big red man that was evil and gets dropped through a trap door into hell and because of which Quemon runs to the back every time someone else shows up behide him. Quemon was delaying time because his major fear was hell. He always knew one day that he would end up in hell but never thought it to be so soon.

Quemon says under his breath "Were is that guy that said he would help me? I need all the help I can get right now..." still going to the back of the line because he was to scared to face the torturers of hell.

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:12 am

When Quemon walked around to get to the back yet another time, he slammed right into the mahogany desk, which appeared before. Now how the fuck did that happen all the sudden. The collision with the desk didn't even make so much as a mark on th desk. Yemma shook his head as if he was saying "Nope" to Quemon's attempts at delaying time.

"Reality warping is amazing, isn't?" Yemma chuckled, "I've encountered your kind before - can't accept your fate when its already upon you. Now, state your name and how you died. Or would you rather me find it while you continue to run into my desk?"

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:12 am

Quemon looks at King Yamma and says "Hey can we do this in a little bit I am waiting for one of your men to show up." as he looks around still hoping for Ryan to show up to his save him. Quemon grabs a stick out of his pocket and starts to break it because of how nervous he was.

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:15 am

Ryan is standing beside Yemna, having just have escorted Quemon to Otherworld. "He's done bad things... but he just doesn't seem that evil from what I've seen. He's a gifted fighter for a human, it's very sad to see him be sent to hell." Ryan gives Quemon a look of sorrow, having narrowly avoided hell himself.

"If you repent maybe you can work as an Angel like me," Ryan said to Quemon, "but you would have to truly regret your past deeds."

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:43 am

Quemon looks over at Ryan and tries to repent but failed in doing so because he is happy that he killed all the people he doesn't regret anything he has ever done. Quemon says to King Yamma while still shaking a little bit about the thought of hell and says "I know I have done a few bad things in my life time but can you please forgive me? and if not maybe this guy(and points at Ryan) could help me to become a better person. I might be able to live and learn by his example." with a fearful smile on his face.

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:26 am

"It's no good." says Ryan. "Piety can not be taught, if you are a servant of darkness you can never master the power of light. I am sorry, but you must be punished for your actions in life." Ryan looks to King Yenma with a mournful gaze. It is not easy to tell a man who has sinned no more than you have that he is beyond redemption.
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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:27 am

Sorry for this double post,

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:44 am

Quemon looks at Ryan and says "What? You said you would help me. What happened? Did you just learn now that I would be considered a bad person? I told you this before I died. You gave me hope for what? To just deny me? Why did you even offer if the only thing you were going to do is tell me to repent my sins? I am not like you. I cannot repent my sins eminently. Only good people can do that. As you have seen I would not be considered a good person. Still why would you tease me by telling me that you were going to save me when you never planned to?" as he stopped shivering from fear and started to feel a blunt rage towards Ryan.

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:04 am

"I guess I was wrong." Says Ryan, remorsefully. "I thought that all people had the same innate moral compass as me... I guess I did not know how truly evil you are. You are a monster, and belong in hell." Ryan then turns and begins to fly away, leaving Quemon to suffer for his crimes. Now that Ryan has seen how truly malicious a super can be, he will no longer show the same mercy as before.

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:24 am

Quemon stands there disgusted by how Ryan judged him and yet was his only hope. Quemon nods his head back and forth and says "Angel boy, only thing you have done today was create a bigger monster as you may call me. I might have been evil at times that I now wish I hadn't but I had to to survive. Life on my planet is hard. You probably don't even come from earth so you shouldn't even judge let alone you probably were made an angel because of how good you were." then notices that he was getting to angry and tries to calm down as he watches Ryan leave.

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PostSubject: Re: 1st one to die    Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:11 am

And at that moment, Quemon fell through the trap door that was right below his feet, descending into hell. His judgemenet has been chosen.

730/2 = 365 PL for each.

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