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PostSubject: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:16 pm

Matza needed to do something he was bored in this new planet, he came here to train and so far, nothing happened, Matza decided to go take a walk, he noticed that the day wasn’t sunny, it was the opposite it was a dark and cloudy sky, it looked like it was about to rain, this weather wasn’t Matza’s favorite but still better than a sunny day.

Mazta continued to walk down the street, as he approached the center of West City, more people were gathered, but none of them had a smile on their face, and the people only formed small groups of 2 or 3 people. 5 guys come in Matza’s sight, they all used a green and black jacket, with a red skull on their back, they were laughing and screaming at people in the street, Matza sat on the chair in a Café and watched them, he could feel something was going to happen.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:29 pm

Jordan was walking by as the dark clouds rolled in and the odd tiny bits of rain dripped on his face, he entered the main city to notice a few people stood around one center, people had started to open up there umbrellas and putting jackets over there heads. Jordan on the other hand did nothing and just carried on walking.

As Jordan continued to walk there were around 5 men who were wearing green and black jackets with red skulls on there backs, they seemed to be taunting people making sly comments and making fun of everyone who passed them, as Jordan walked past them they taunted him swearing at him as one of them called his mother. He stopped turning around looking at them then walked over to them. "What did you say?!"

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:46 pm

Now it was raining and the people were all entering the shops and houses, the street was now empty, there were only six guys who were tracking Matza’s attention, this 6 was a dude wearing a blue jacket, that could be telling two things to Matza, or this guy was their leader, or he wasn’t part of the group. This question was answered very quickly, the man passed through them, when suddenly one of the green jacket guy’s told the purple haired guy something offensive, this turned to them with a angry face.
Matza stood up and went to them, he didn’t want a fight with them, or between them so he stood between them, “Calm down boys”. One of the green jacket guy, jumped to the shoulders of other of them, then he gave an even bigger jump, passing above Matza landing near Jordan, then other of the run towards Matza. This was now a fight, Matza felt responsible for this, and now he had to protect himself and the purple haired guy.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:56 pm

Quemon saw these guys with green and black jackets while pick pocketing a few random people. He knew something was going to happen with these guys. Quemon smiled as he saw one of the men in black and green pull out a gun. Quemon then leaned on a Cafe window as pulled out a cigarette and started smoking it. After he started smoking he felt a drop on his head so Quemon grabbed an umbrella from a random person. The random person said "give me back my umbrella." as Quemon ignored him.

One of the men in green and black aimed a gun at a persons head. Quemon laughed as he saw the gun knowing that someone was gonna get killed. He looked around but there was no police in site. Quemon started to feel the temptation of his strength and so very arrogant that he grabbed the random person who wanted his umbrella back and throw him at the guys in blue and green vests. Then he launched a Ki blast at the guy he through. Quemon wanted to show to the men in black and green that he is leader of these streets. Quemon feeling the evil and power pump right through him as he walked over. He never felt so alive.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:12 pm

People had begun to walk inside as the rain began to get heavier, Jordan noticed Quemon in the corner of his eye causing small amounts of trouble robbing an umbrella from a random bystander. Shortly after one of the men pulled out a gun pointing it at one of the bystanders, then Quemon had launched a person at one of them Jordan shook his head not really wanting to fight, yet he had no choice.

He grabbed the man by his throat and began to punch into his stomach causing him to cough up blood as he uppercutted him in the jaw as his hand was encased by flames, the man went flying into the sky, he then folded his arms as he landed besides him as he watied to see what Quemon and Matza would now do.

- Fire Dragon Claw

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:51 pm

Matza saw the two powerful man performing Ki attacks so he guessed it was his turn he lifted his arm in the air and his ki started to flow inside it, then his arm has all purple with the ki flowing by it,“you better dodge it won’t miss!” he said this to the man with an angry face, the man started to run in his direction, trying to punch him, Matza dodged and gave with his knee in the man’s face, he stopped the charge and grabbed the man’s neck, then he throw him in the air, jumped, and gave him a round house kick in the face, making some damage.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:27 pm

Quemon smiled as he blended back into the crowd he moved with the crowd to try to get behind Matza and get at least one cheap shot. He chose Matza because he looked like the strongest and like the goodest one because of his looks. Quemon knew they would not even notice him because everyone was fighting each other while it looked like he was leaving, but that was not the case. 72

Quemon then noticed the Ki slash that Matza used and had a great idea that would help him a lot. He walked through the crowd until he was behide Matza. Quemon tries to hit Matza straight in the back. He also wanted to get Matzas technique Ki Slash. Which by hitting him Quemon would get his Technique.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:39 pm

Jordan watched as Matz and Quemon had began to fight various other members of the group as Quemon had gone behind Matza, he presumed he was going in for a cheep shot, his suspicions were proved to be true as he aimed a cheap shot in his back, Jordan decided to act.

He put out his palm and a huge boulder grew in his hand as he shot it out at Quemon, seeing that Matza wasn't going to attack him. For now. The ball split wth numerous balls of lava flying at Quemon, if any of these made contacts his skin would be pierced through easily. Jordan watched as the man with the blue jacket show numerous Ki blasts out at them all.

-Lava Burst

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:02 pm

Matza was about to dodge Quemon punch, but Jordan had already hit Quemon he looked at Quemon that was about to be killed by the Shots of Lava, Matza decided he wouldn’t react, instead he thanked Jordan “Thanks man” then he noticed that the Green jacket guys were about to shot him, Jordan and Quemon. He acted fast he formed a Purple Ki Ball in his hand and throw it at the first guy, then he controlled the ball to hit the second guy and to finalize his attack he made the ki ball blow in the 3rd man’s face. They had passed out. Matza focused in Jordan’s progress with Quemon.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:38 pm

Quemon touched Mazta while trying to dodge the lava balls which giving him Ki slash. Quemon tried to dodge the Lava Balls but it was to late. It melted parts of his arm parts of his legs and even a part on the back of his head. Quemon falls to the pavement being hurt and tries to get up. Quemon asks "Who the h-ll do you think you are? I wasn't even going after you!!!" as he tries to pull out his uncharged Ki slash. He tries to hit Jordan with it but it failed and ended but fading before he could hurt anyone with it. Quemon didn't understand the attack and the way it worked, he just thought it would work instantly when used. Quemon thought it was a defective technique and was pissed. Quemon also noticed more guys in black and green started to show up through the crowds of people and started to attack more.

Quemon started to focus more on the men in black and green more. Quemon was not sure if he should run away or stay to fight a little more but knew if the fight kept up to the same pace he would have to run away.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:24 pm

As Jordan watched the lava burst had took a toll on Quemon as the ball hit part of his arms and legs, one of them even hit the back of his head. Matza thanked him and he put a thumb's up signaling it was okay. Now it was personal, Matza could deal with them for all he cares, yet he decided to go after Quemon. Quemon began to charge an attack, he decided not to underestimate it, as he rushed at him and attempted to launch his fire dragon claw he attempted to punch him in the stomach.

-Fire Dragon Claw

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:24 pm

As Jordan watched the lava burst had took a toll on Quemon as the ball hit part of his arms and legs, one of them even hit the back of his head. Matza thanked him and he put a thumb's up signaling it was okay. Now it was personal, Matza could deal with them for all he cares, yet he decided to go after Quemon. Quemon began to charge an attack, he decided not to underestimate it, as he rushed at him and attempted to launch his fire dragon claw he attempted to punch him in the stomach.

-Fire Dragon Claw

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:38 pm

Matza saw Jordan’s thumbs up, so he didn’t worry anymore, then after he took all the members of the Green and black jacket, he noticed that a Green and black van was speeding in their direction from there 7 man came out with machine guns in their hands “You BETTER RUN you midgets” they told to Jordan, Matza and Quemon. Matza worried he knew that they would be dead in a few seconds, so he had to act fast, this next move would take all his ki.
Matza’s ki started to flow by his arm, he was charging a ki slash attack, that would cut the van in half, making it blow taking the seven man down, he couldn’t be seen doing that so he run behind a building.

+1 charge post-ki slash

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 4:40 pm

Quemon dodged Jordan's hits and yells at Jordan "You are attacking one of the only two people that have come to help you." and then takes a good look at Jordan up and down and notices he looks like a thug himself and says, "You know you look and act like one of the guys in black and green jackets. With skills like that you could do better then them.” Quemon knew by the looking at Jordan that he was good guy but knew if he added some motivation that he would become evil.

Then the van drove in and out from the back came a guy with a turret. Quemon watched as the guy yelled, “You BETTER RUN you midgets.” Quemon ran to a place for cover. Quemon knew Jordan was still after him and yells to him “We can settle this at another time. I don’t know about you but I wanna live” Quemon wasn’t sure if Jordan was faster and knew if Jordan tackled him that both of them would die by the turret. Quemon also knew there were people endangered by the turret and wondered if Jordan would choose his life over the peoples.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:36 pm

As Jordan's attack had failed resulting in Quemon dodging his punches rather easily, the men began to taunt them as a van arrived when 7 men had came out holding machine guns, Jordan switched his priority's to the men ignoring Quemon and launched his Lava blast at them, hoping combined with Matza's attack it would do some immense damage.

Jordan then looked at Quemon, don't get him wrong he didn't want to fight, yet he tried to attack an innocent man who did nothing wrong to Quemon and considering he launched a bystander into the middle of there fight he should be classed as evil. He decided to speak. "Considering the actions you have done so far have been nothing but evil, I do believe its my right to attack you for those who cannot do so themselves. So now that we have that chance why stop?"

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:10 pm

Jordan’s lava killed 3 of them, so the 4 that were left started to shot killing most people around them, it was now time for Matza’s attack he jumped the highest he could, his arm was purple with the flowing ki around it, Matza made a quick move with his arm letting a powerful purple ki slash come out that cute the van in half making it blow killing all the bandits. Matza landed almost without ki, it wasn’t one of his strengths, he had to rest before he could do something more. He was felling numb, and he had no idea what it was, then he looked to the ground and saw blood, he had been shot in the shoulder and with all his moves, he had lost a lot of blood.
Matza stood up and looked to Jordan while he said “That Freaking Toad is now your problem sorry” Matza started to walk slowly to a pharmacy looking for help.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Sun Dec 11, 2011 8:44 pm

Once the turrets were no more Quemon came back out and says "I think you miss interpreted what I meant to do guys." and then smile like if he didn't do anything wrong. He knew that they were weakened but so was he so he tried to scam his way out because that is what he was good at.

Quemon knew if he ran away they would follow so he stayed. He looked at the dead body thinking about how much money they had and then looked back at Jordan and says trying to sound good "They could have been so much better then what they were." Quemon had a fake tear in his eye and looked so sad. Though on the inside of he was happy to seeing all of the dead men. Quemon knew he wanted to kill more but knew not to in front of the heroes.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 15, 2011 5:30 pm

The final men were killed which gave Jordan quite a lot of relief, he waved at Matza as he took of towards the pharmacy, yet that toad Quemon was still there, Jordan wasn't buying Quemon's act, he wasn't stupid and it wasn't working on it, yet he decided to let him speak a little longer. He looked around at the dead men as the bystanders cleared from the distance, buildings had been shot at with broken glass clear in the windows with some corpses on the side of the street. It was a horrid sight.

Pausing he decided to speak as he turned his back on Quemon, pretty much giving him an open chance to strike him, what he would do next would determine how Jordan would react. "Listen, toad guy I saw what you did, I saw how you fought, you fought like you wanted to kill them, so don't try this bullshit with me. I was acting with self defense, now I suggest you leave. Good day." And with that he began to walk of yet his guard wasn't fully down as he was still aware of the danger Quemon was.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:33 pm

Matza entered the pharmacy and asked for some bandages, the women gave them to him, and helped Matza to wrap himself in them, his shoulder was now good he just needed to rest, he woman tried to sell him some pills for the pain, but Matza immediately refused, he was a saiyan and he had his pride.
Matza exited the pharmacy and looked around everything was settling down, that made him happier, Matza needed to get stronger, he felt very weak, he fought against one and allied with the other and he wasn’t the stronger than any of them, and as a saiyan he could not accept that…
Matza saw Jordan leaving so he did the same, this was one adventure that took its time, Matza was hoping to fight them again.
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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 15, 2011 10:46 pm

Quemon didn't pay any attention to the Matza anymore and was more focused on Jordan. Quemon yelled over to Jordan with a red, angry look on his face. He and was very pissed about what Jordan said and replies "What I did?! I didn't kill any of the bandits!!! You did!!! How I fought?! I fought just like you!!! I fought with a fist and a little energy here and there!!! Let alone I did not want to kill them!!! That is why infact I did not kill a single one of them while you killed about 10!!! Were is self defense in slaughtering 10 men? I might not know why you started to fight but I do know there is no reason for killing 10 men" He was still a little pissed by Jordans words but was happy to tell him the facts. Quemon had a joy of showing that he was not evil even though he knew he was. He was pretty sure Jordan would not reply because he thought Jordan was the kind of guy that would be classed as a Wanna Be.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:28 pm

Quemon's comments were filled with a load of shit, the men clearly had attacked them first and his attempet at trying to make Jordan feel on the same level was not working. Jordan paused turning around and sighing slowly looking up at him. "Your like a little kid, all you do is turn around a blame others, get over yourself. The next time I see you attack someone innocent. Your done for kid..." With that he decided to take his leave turning around walking of waving at Matza still in ear range to hear whether Quemon would be brave enough to say anything else. He had was slowly losing his cool when he realized there was no point being angered by a punk kid, he was just as bad as the other punks which he had just killed, he didn't understand when it comes to surviving and self defence, it was okay. They weren't innocent and they defiantly deserved what came to them.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Mon Dec 19, 2011 11:15 pm

Quemon was ranged at what Jordan said and replied in a pissed of voice saying "You think this is over... Don't you? You want me to blame myself... Don't you?" and fires a Ki blast at a little kid that had the nicest smile. He killed the kid and had a devious smile on his face after he slaughter a kid for no reason. He yells "Are you happy?! I killed 1 person while you killed 10!!! It is MY FAULT!!!" Quemon then frowns with a disgusted look. He then says with a attitude "So are you happy now I said it? I said my fault." Quemons rage was uncontrollable and was daring to do anything at this point to show he was boss. He even gets ready for any attack that Jordan would throw at him.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:11 am

Jordan watched the innocent kid die, he was about to lose his cool before hand yet this had put him over the line. It was gone for Quemon now. He promised himself that Quemon would die a horrid death by his hand. Whether that would be today or another time. Jordan looked at him with glare, as he breathed out slowly closing his eyes as he began to control his mini rage, he wasn't about to be the same as Quemon. A mindless freak who likes to blame others for his own faults in life.

Jordan walked up to Quemon and paused when he began to speak giving Quemon one last chance to go now before he would finally lose it and attack him, he didn't want that to happen but at this rate it was inevitable. "You got one chance to leave here, the death of that kid now results in your death. So if your smart get out of here..." He shrugged waiting for him to act next, he was prepared for him to either attack him or walk away. If he was smart which he doubted he was, he would walk away.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:21 pm

Quemon looked unmoved for a little while and finally says with a pissed tone in his voice "You and me both caused that kids death. Don't deny it. You insulted a man for arguing which cost your moral rights and that kid his life. You might consider me the scum of the earth but I would look in a mere to see I am not the only one. If you plan to be a hero then you better watch what you do and what you say other wise another person will end up dead one day. It might not be from me either, it could be anyone." with a angry looking face.

Quemon loved killing sweet little innocent creatures so he was quite happy on the inside and wanted to kill more but knew that would cause another problem with the hero so he staid still just focusing on Jordan and waiting for a response. Quemon judged him by his look and got into a defense position waiting for Jordan's response.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:53 am

Jordan decided to ignore Quemon, he was a fool. He only blamed others because he can't comprehend that he was to blame for his own actions and that everyone will face judgment before God and pay for there crimes and sins, and those who have been 'good' will go to heaven for entirety and those who are evil will burn in hell. Quemon would be the latter, unless he changed his ways yet he would never do that, he probably blames the child for being there.

Jordan decided to speak still keeping his cool not about to attack him, he did however feel sorry for the child, he didn't deserve to die not so young anyway he shook his head then began to speak. "You will pay for your crimes, God will punish you. Grow up you little punk bitch, one day I will kill you, I promise you that!"

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:21 pm

Quemon cool down then starts to smile and laugh a little and says "I never said I wont pay for my crimes what I said was you might wanna watch yourself before another person like him (points at the dead child) ends up dead. Words... They can get anything done. They can get you rich. They can get you poor. They can make innocent little children die. It all matters on what you say. I mean there are some nice women over there that look explosive... but that would be if I got upset over you calling me a punk ass bitch. And when that one day comes I might fall... but If I do fall I will kill millions of people with me making more deaths then I would ever make if I would live." he laughs a little while looking strait at Jordan waiting for a reply knowing the basic answer he was going to say though he did not know if he was still going to fight him.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 22, 2011 3:54 pm

Jordan Laughed then felt sorry for Quemon he was just a fool and he decided to walk of for Quemons sake, he needed to die yet he knew he would get his own one day. Whether Jordan himself would do it or someone else would kill him it didn't matter, all he knew was that Quemon would die. He paused closing his eyes for the child then decided to speak for the final time to this son of a bitch. If he ever spoke to him again he would be on his deathbed by his own hand.

"You son of a bitch. Your gonna die I promise you this, now go turn around and go back to that whole were you came from you little punk. I will kill you." He turned around then walked away from Quemon going into the distance turning down a few alleyways until he was gone and disappeared out of anyone's sight.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 22, 2011 4:15 pm

Quemon laughed a little as he knew that it was over and just watched as Jordan left making his one last comment saying "By the way I will kill again because of this" and then walked over to the dead criminal bodies and stole anything they had left for money then walked away.

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: First Time in the City   Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:30 pm

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